Post by talonclaw on Nov 17, 2007 13:28:16 GMT -5
Name:Talonclaw
Age:28 moons
Gender:Tom
Clan:Shadowclan
Rank:Deputy
Appearance:Talonclaw is a Tan male with faint darker specks.He has beautiful Green eyes and double paws.His Claws are unusually long;he is a superb fighter.He does his best for his clan.His tail is tipped with black.On his chest there is a white spot-looking like a talon.This is how he got his name.
Personality:Talonclaw is very Caring.He is Courageous and Brave cat who doesn't flinch at any threat.He protects his clan with ferocity and spunk.His mother,Stronggaze is the reason for this.She was a excellent fighter and hunter.Now,happily an elder,she guides her son through thick and thin.Legend has it that she was one of the most nurturing mothers in Cat history.He wants to be a father someday.
History:Talonclaw had a brother.Stonepelt was a betrayer and lier.After being executed from the clan,he became a rouge,Swearing vengeance on his Popular brother.Shortly after that,their father,Endlesswind, died of a cough that did not respond to any herbs.Talonclaw had only his mother.And she had him.They endured the toughest and softest times together.They went through battles won and lost.He doesn't know how he would cope without her.
RP example:A hiss ripped the silence of the camp.Stonepelt had attacked his elderly mother! "What are you doing!!" Talonclaw screamed.He shoved His brother off Stronggaze,bleeding from a bad shoulder wound. "I am sick of everyone favoring you!" Stonepelt snarled. Talonclaws eyes were steady. "I never new." he barely whispered. MysticStar stepped up to the young brothers.Her eyes were troubled. "For attacking an elder...." she took a dramatic pause "...You must be....EXECUTED!!" she blurted the words,the painful words out.Stonepelt was the best hunter in the clan. Stonepelt snarled again.He ran toward the entrance of the camp,only to stop short. "I forever will remember my brother." he said calmly. "Only to remember to KILL him!" He hissed crossly.He ran out the entrance......
Others:I know tons of other cats are basically waiting to be accepted to be Shadowclan Deputy.My only hopes are that you accept me. Thankyou
Name:Dovewings
Age:14 moons
Gender:She-cat
Clan:Shadowclan
Rank:Warrior
Appearance:Dovewings is a Silver Grey she-cat with Sparkly green eyes.She has some creme on her ear and white on her chest.She is very shiny,like a fish.Her eyes are very glittery in the moonlight.She has a very slender build.
Personality:Dovewings is very affectionate.She has such a sweet personality.She is never harsh or hostile.She is only fierce in battle.She has never in the history of her life snapped at a clanmate.And she is very caring.Anyones hurt physically or emotionally hurt,Dovewings right there to comfort them.
History.Dovewings parents were rouges.Cazana and Big Si,the leaders of the rouge group Passion came from are her parents.So generally,they are sisters.Dovewings wandered into SC camp one afternoon.They took hr in and nurtured her from the start.When Dovewings Foster mother died,She became much quieter.She was alot sweeter,too.
RP example:(as a kit) Dove ran through the forest.She was being chased by her mother,Cazana. "Noooooo!!!" Dove shouted.She ran faster.Soon,She felt Cazana run the other direction.But she still ran like a Perigion falcon.She fell into a clearing.Tons of cats surrounded her.A large She-cat stalked up to her. "Whats your name?" She asked slowly. "Dove!" she wailed. "From this day until apprenticed you will be known as Dovekit.May Starclan light you path." Mysticstar called. And this is how Dovewings became a Shadowclan cat.
Other:Dapple,if your the one who accepts this Cinderflame and Dovewings can be mates.
Age:28 moons
Gender:Tom
Clan:Shadowclan
Rank:Deputy
Appearance:Talonclaw is a Tan male with faint darker specks.He has beautiful Green eyes and double paws.His Claws are unusually long;he is a superb fighter.He does his best for his clan.His tail is tipped with black.On his chest there is a white spot-looking like a talon.This is how he got his name.
Personality:Talonclaw is very Caring.He is Courageous and Brave cat who doesn't flinch at any threat.He protects his clan with ferocity and spunk.His mother,Stronggaze is the reason for this.She was a excellent fighter and hunter.Now,happily an elder,she guides her son through thick and thin.Legend has it that she was one of the most nurturing mothers in Cat history.He wants to be a father someday.
History:Talonclaw had a brother.Stonepelt was a betrayer and lier.After being executed from the clan,he became a rouge,Swearing vengeance on his Popular brother.Shortly after that,their father,Endlesswind, died of a cough that did not respond to any herbs.Talonclaw had only his mother.And she had him.They endured the toughest and softest times together.They went through battles won and lost.He doesn't know how he would cope without her.
RP example:A hiss ripped the silence of the camp.Stonepelt had attacked his elderly mother! "What are you doing!!" Talonclaw screamed.He shoved His brother off Stronggaze,bleeding from a bad shoulder wound. "I am sick of everyone favoring you!" Stonepelt snarled. Talonclaws eyes were steady. "I never new." he barely whispered. MysticStar stepped up to the young brothers.Her eyes were troubled. "For attacking an elder...." she took a dramatic pause "...You must be....EXECUTED!!" she blurted the words,the painful words out.Stonepelt was the best hunter in the clan. Stonepelt snarled again.He ran toward the entrance of the camp,only to stop short. "I forever will remember my brother." he said calmly. "Only to remember to KILL him!" He hissed crossly.He ran out the entrance......
Others:I know tons of other cats are basically waiting to be accepted to be Shadowclan Deputy.My only hopes are that you accept me. Thankyou
Name:Dovewings
Age:14 moons
Gender:She-cat
Clan:Shadowclan
Rank:Warrior
Appearance:Dovewings is a Silver Grey she-cat with Sparkly green eyes.She has some creme on her ear and white on her chest.She is very shiny,like a fish.Her eyes are very glittery in the moonlight.She has a very slender build.
Personality:Dovewings is very affectionate.She has such a sweet personality.She is never harsh or hostile.She is only fierce in battle.She has never in the history of her life snapped at a clanmate.And she is very caring.Anyones hurt physically or emotionally hurt,Dovewings right there to comfort them.
History.Dovewings parents were rouges.Cazana and Big Si,the leaders of the rouge group Passion came from are her parents.So generally,they are sisters.Dovewings wandered into SC camp one afternoon.They took hr in and nurtured her from the start.When Dovewings Foster mother died,She became much quieter.She was alot sweeter,too.
RP example:(as a kit) Dove ran through the forest.She was being chased by her mother,Cazana. "Noooooo!!!" Dove shouted.She ran faster.Soon,She felt Cazana run the other direction.But she still ran like a Perigion falcon.She fell into a clearing.Tons of cats surrounded her.A large She-cat stalked up to her. "Whats your name?" She asked slowly. "Dove!" she wailed. "From this day until apprenticed you will be known as Dovekit.May Starclan light you path." Mysticstar called. And this is how Dovewings became a Shadowclan cat.
Other:Dapple,if your the one who accepts this Cinderflame and Dovewings can be mates.